Hawk Roosting – Part 2 – Edited

Predator:
I conquered high over the forest, with the gentle breeze gliding through my feathers. I look around at my surroundings, embracing its beauty. I lay still, like rock. My body was in a deep sleep, but as always I was alert and ready. For some this is just a dream, a goal. For me this is a reality. I was reminiscing over my previous attacks, but also the future outbreak I was prepared for.
As well as myself, my offspring need feeding. Watching them grown is not only breathtaking, but in my eyes art. They are delicate, innocent, future killers. The idea of of them evolving into what I am, astonishes me. When unattended, I hear the soft screech, each cry has an individual meaning, from hungry to desperation of comfort and guidance.
The height at which I perch is an advantage.
The soft breeze and warming sun compliment my attack. The sky lights single out my victims; my view is so dominant, it is as if the world and everything in it has its vision on me. Now I am in control.
Day time is far different to the night, creatures will confidently live in peace without a worry, but in the darkness, the deadliest of creatures will stay low in the shadows, to avoid conflict. Prey do not expect death in the open.
I can feel the bark in my grasp, my nails pierced into the branch.
The fresh smell of nature moves within the atmosphere.
Every detail has been adapted in evolution, everything created before me has led up to this. My claws appear hand crafted too precision. Its beauty is overwhelming. I am an extraordinary freak of nature. My claws have such power, such anger and aggressiveness within them.
I take the innocent enemy from it’s safety. I decide where I kill my prey. It is mine.  It is my choice.
I do not feel guilty. Its just a part of nature, anything more powerful would do the same to me.
My common individuality, ripping body parts from each other. I watch the blood pour down the oak tree slowly. Such a beautiful sight to me. This is death, everyone comes to an end sooner or later, i guarantee nothing will stop me, the death of this is my goal.
Prey:
Again, I stay low to the ground, with the occasional gentle breeze, it reminds me of the outer world. There’s nothing around to embrace or even admire.
I spend most of my days hidden with my family. I hide away in the holes of the ground, it’s the only place where I can assure myself I will stay alive. When the hawks escaped the panorama of my vision, I occasionally leave to access food for my family, those are my most dangerous moments.
I look far into the distance, trying to focus on my opponent, but the sun blinds my eyes. You would of expected me to be killed in the night at my weakest point, when i am most venerable? I myself have witnessed murders before, its routine for him but a tragedy for us. This is how things will stay. No changes will be made. 

Legalising Marijuana – Part 2

Are you aware that by the time I finish this speech almost 100 people will have died as a result of alcohol abuse, worldwide? In America alone 88000 people died as a result of alcohol in 2013. In comparison between 1999 and 2007 there were only 26 deaths, in which Marijuana was identified as an underlying cause.
If these statistics are correct then it would imply that either marijuana is safer that alcohol or 27000 times the amount of Americans abuse alcohol as opposed to marijuana.
Does this seem accurate? Can I get a show of hands comparison between number of alcohol users number of marijuana users?
I am here to talk about the legalisation of weed and hopefully point you in the direction of being for this plant.
I am going to start off by talking about the bad side of it, it is a known fact that heavy marijuana users have been known to have a lower IQ and in some cases, depression and psychosis; but note my use of the word heavy.
Now with the positives…
Marijuana helps elevate the pain for people with chronic health conditions such as Multiple Sclerosis, many of these sufferers would rather smoke a natural plant than take pharmaceutical drugs.
 How can something like alcohol be legal when it costs the NHS such a large amount of money when it comes to alcohol abuse?
Let me put you in a scenario, imagine that there are two worlds, one world where a person is stressed from daily life routines, where they can get a specified amount of safe cannabis from a dispenser to help elevate the stresses, or the world we live in now, where people going through these issues have to travel to a street corner dealer, where they pick up skunk, full of toxins and dangerous chemicals, that could trigger problems such as depression or psychosis. Which world would you rather live in?
In the state of Arizona the government provides a specified amount of the plant to help the patients deal with the day to day stresses of living in pain, in the meantime the government could and should be using the money they have saved on not making new medication on exploring other ways of finding cures for the illnesses. Also in 2014, Colorado made over $1bn from their marijuana dispenser clinics. More money within the government, is more money for extra healthcare and facilities.
One reason I support weed is because, sounds and visions are enhanced in a way unlike no other. For instants, when listening to music, you are able to hear certain instruments and notes that you are unable to pick up on when not intoxicated; but this is just what I’ve heard.
Smoking for most people, will make them feel more social and confident, the other bonus, when smoking with friends, is surroundings take on a comical ambiance.
Most groups will bond over laughter and sharing jokes, laughing on marijuana simply intensifies the high.
If you have ever been to a Marijuana legalisation protest, you will see that everyone around is peacefully smoking, minding there own business, yet the Government and the Daily Mail still portray them as ”Scruffy Stoners”
Across the world, gangs have street wars and people are regularly murdered over financial difficulties due to drugs. Its like a food chain, you have the ‘’boss’’ at the top, who distributes his weed to his various dealers, often the lower skilled workers, at the bottom of this chain, are usually more into the drugs than the money and end up smoking it themselves.
I sympathise with police forces across the world  fighting drug crime; it’s a never ending war.
To conclude, marijuana is perceived as a sinful, however scientific reasons have proven that, the intake of of the plant is far better then any form of tobacco and alcohol.

Bare Vexed – Part 2

Dear Isabelle Kerr,

 I am writing to you in addition to your article ‘Twerking, selfie and unlike? Young people don’t speak like that – I should know’. When I read this article I agreed with every individual point that you made. Being a 16 year old boy in a Secondary School, I am constantly around slang and from a personal point of view I can clarify that like fashion trends or in this case slang, the terms come and go.

Us as a youth, do not want to be remembered as the generation which were known to twerk and take selfies. We want to be remembered for intelligence not the motion of girls hips. It’s things like this that make older generations portray us as, like you said ‘Yobs’ with the dialect of idiots.

Being around slang constantly, where it gets used every few word,  I have seen terms evaporate from our generations speech. I personally don’t remember the last time I heard someone being called ”Butters.”  Twerking and selfie came from America and transferred to the UK, they are not even widely used here, so why have they been put in to the Oxford English Dictionary?

One point that I also want to raise is, why haven’t swear words been a new addition to the Dictionary? Not only are the more widely used across the world,but they have stayed in trends, at least for as long as i can remember.

 I’d Like to thank you again for raising the awareness and stating the issue of this matter.

 

From yours sincerely,

Akira Lasharie Sato

Legalising Marijuana

Are you aware that by the time I finish this speech almost 100 people will have died as a result of alcohol abuse, worldwide? In America alone 88000 people died as a result of alcohol in 2013. In comparison, between 1999 and 2007 there were only 26 deaths, in which Marijuana was identified as an underlying cause.
If these statistics are correct then it would imply that either, marijuana is safer that alcohol, or 27000 times the amount of Americans abuse alcohol as opposed to marijuana.
Does this seem accurate? Can I get a show of hands comparison between number of alcohol users number of marijuana users.
I am here to talk about the legalisation of weed and hopefully point you in the direction of being for this plant.
I’m going to start off by talking about the bad side of it, it is a known fact that heavy marijuana users have been known to have a lower IQ and in some cases, depression and psychosis; but note my use of the word heavy.
Now with the positives…
Marijuana helps elevate the pain for people with chronic health conditions such as Multiple Sclerosis, many of these sufferers would rather smoke a natural plant than take pharmaceutical drugs.
In the state of Arizona, the government provides a specified amount of the plant to help the patients deal with the day to day stresses of living in pain, in the meantime the government could and should be using the money they have saved on not making new medication on exploring other ways of finding cures for the illnesses. Also, in 2014, Colorado made over $1bn from their marijuana dispenser clinics. More money within the government, is more money for extra healthcare and facilities.
One reason I support weed is because, sounds and visions are enhanced in a way unlike no other. For instants, when listening to music, you are able to hear certain instruments and notes that you are unable to pick up on when not intoxicated; but this is just what I’ve heard.
Smoking for most people, will make them feel more social and confident, the other bonus, when smoking with friends, is surroundings take on a comical ambiance.
Most groups will bond over laughter and sharing jokes, laughing on marijuana simply intensifies the high.
Across the world, gangs have street wars and people are regularly murdered over financial difficulties due to drugs. Its like a food chain, you have the ‘’boss’’ at the top, who distributes his weed to his various dealers, often the lower skilled workers, at the bottom of this chain, are usually more into the drugs than the money and end up smoking it themselves.
I sympathise with police forces across the world  fighting drug crime; it’s a never ending war.
To conclude, marijuana is perceived as a sinful, however scientific reasons have proven that, the intake of of the plant is far better then any form of tobacco and alcohol.

Compare the ways in which monstrosity is presented within Frankenstein and The Tempest. Essay Plan.

Shelley and Shakespeare both find ways to complicate the way in which monsters are formed, meaning both Frankenstein’s monster and Caliban were not born evil, but made to be, by what has impacted their lives. In this essay I am going to be comparing the ways in which monstrosity is present within both texts through the characters of Frankenstein and Caliban. Mary Shelley wrote Frankenstein in 1818, a time when doctors were intrigued at exploring the dead. The theme of death runs through the overall plot of the novel. It was known to be a worldwide phenomenon in the Gothic horror genre; this is a great set up to lead to the themes of death, revenge, the idea of losing a loved one and the supernatural. These are all themes that also appear in The Tempest, written in the 1600’s by William Shakespeare. I will explore these themes throughout this essay to explore monstrosity.

Both monsters seek love, but it comes off in the wrong way. Caliban was once loved by his mother, but had her taken away from him from a young age, leaving him to suffer a cold life with no support and care. Caliban tries to get the attention form the only female on the island, Miranda, Prospero’s daughter.  As Caliban was never taught what exactly is morally right or wrong, he attempts to rape her.  this incident of course came across to be a monstrous attack but was initially an attempt of affection, it is undecided in story if he was aware that it was wrong, due to the fact that he had never had a female companion, one to tell him what was right or wrong and also he was so desperate for love from a females love.

Similar to Caliban, Frankenstein’s monster was also abandoned at birth, in this case it was intentional, Victor realised the mistake that he had made and left it as soon as he could, ‘’how can I describe my emotions at this catastrophe.’’ Later on into the novel, the monster unexpectedly turns violent, again seeking the care and affection he was never given. While Frankenstein is watching his creator, he see’s a young boy, victors brother, at this point he is unaware of this, he is warmed by the thought of having him as a friend and rushes over to him. like any child would be, he panics and screams out insults, commenting on his appearance ‘’Monster! Ugly wretch’’, he then mentions the name Frankenstein, which triggers the Monsters mind into realising who he is, as a revenge he strangles the child to death.

In both stories, Caliban and Frankenstein’s monster are known for their repulsive appearance. In the 1600s, Caliban would of been played by a black male, or a white man black out. this shows the attitudes towards the views of how a monstrous character would of been portrayed in previous times.

Caliban’s character was directed to be black, or ‘’moon calf’’ meaning his skin was black with white spots. This was intentionally done to alienate Caliban from the other white characters. Every character in the Tempest looks down on him with disgust due to his image, I feel that his monstrous appearance has had an impact to the position that he is in with Prospero, being a slave, along side his violent outburst with Miranda. As Caliban’s features are different to the norm, he is treated differently, he is looked down upon as if to be a wild animal, in some cases i find the his appearance is an outer shell to how he is on the inside and his monstrous behaviour, but when you feel this way in the story, Caliban throws the reader off by changing his attitude towards everything, in one circumstance he uses imagery to describe the island and how beautiful it is ‘’ Sounds, and sweet airs that give delight and hurt not.’’ Prospero also describes Caliban by saying ‘’not honoured with human shape’’ this is an example or literal imagery, automatically giving the opinion that Caliban’s outer shell is in some way perceived to be negative.

Frankenstein’s situation is very similar, Victor created him to be ultimate revolution in science, every detail of him was constructed to be better and stronger but the outcome turned out to him having the appearance of a monster. one example of how his image has interfered is when Frankenstein’s monster gets chased from a nearby village by its inhabitants due to his features. Linking back to the scene of Frankenstein’s younger brother, Shelley uses particular language features to describe Frankenstein’s monster, ‘’you are an ogre’’ this passage is an intensified use of imagery to exaggerate his appearance, the use of imagery is also used when the child says ‘’you wish to eat me and tear me to pieces’’ which also exaggerates monstrosity and evilness within the creation.

Another factor used to present monstrosity is their isolation from society. Frankenstein’s monster expresses his feelings by saying ‘’Who can describe and consternation on beholding me?’’ this quote is a prime example of how Frankenstein has been pushed away from other humans. It uses rhetorical questions, to show the creations helplessness in this situation. this is a way Mary Shelley has portrayed mental monstrosity, an example of alienation and frustration is where the ‘’Monster’’ meets the family in the woods, when not seen, he has no issue with the blind father, this example links back to his image.

Similar to Frankenstein,  Caliban has also been a reject from society, at the end of the script Caliban apologises for mistakes that he had made ‘’What a thrice double ass was I, to take this drunkard for a god’’ everyone in the ending scene was given forgiveness by Prospero except for Caliban, who was then put back into the position of being a slave.It is as if this scene, Caliban has learnt to except his position in life, and the text uses derogatory terminology to put himself down, this scene is where i find that Caliban excepts his role within society, understanding that not only have his previous violent acts towards Miranda, his image, but now his mental state has driven himself to a lost world of monstrosity.

To conclude, in both novels, Shakespeare and Shelley manipulate language to present and bring out the monstrosity of Caliban and the Creation. They use language features such as imagery and derogatory terminology. The characters actions such as rape and murder are not justified but us as readers we sympathise for them as their conditions and lifestyles are some what horrific. Both authors therefore complicate the idea of monstrosity, through their work.

Hawk Roosting Transformation

I conquered high over the forest, with the gentle breeze gliding through my feathers. I look around at my surroundings, embracing its beauty. I lay still, like rock. My body was in a deep sleep, but as always I was alert and ready. For some this is just a dream, a goal. For me this is a reality. I was reminiscing over my previous attacks, but also the future outbreak I was prepared for.
The height at which I perch, is an advantage.
The soft breeze and warming sun compliment my attack. The sky lights single out my victims; my view is so dominant, it is as if the world and everything in it has it’s vision on me. Now I am in control.
I can feel the bark in my grasp,: my nails pierced into the branch.
The fresh smell of nature moves within the atmosphere.
Every detail, has been adapted in evolution, everything created before me has led up to this. My claws appear hand crafted too precision. Its beauty is overwhelming. I am an extraordinary freak of nature. My claws have such power, such anger and aggressiveness within them.
I take the innocent enemy from it’s safety. I decide where I kill my prey. It is mine.  It is my choice.
I do not feel guilty. Its just a part of nature: anything more powerful would do the same to me.
My common individuality, ripping body parts from each other. I watch the blood pour down the oak tree, slowly. Such a beautiful sight to me. This is death, everyone comes to an end sooner or later, i guarantee nothing will stop me, the death of this is my goal.
(Changes to prey)
I look far into the distance, trying to focus on my opponent, but the sun blinds my eyes. I myself have witnessed murders before, its routine for him but a tragedy for us. This is how things will stay. No changes will be made.
.

Bare Vexed

Dear Isabelle Kerr,

 

I am writing to you in addition to your article ‘Twerking, selfie and unlike? Young people don’t speak like that – I should know’. When I read this article, I agreed with every individual point that you made. Being a 16 year old boy in a Secondary School, I am constantly around slang, and from a personal point of view I can clarify that like fashion, trends, or in this case slang, come and go.

Us as a youth, do not want to be remembered as the generation which were known to twerk and take selfies. We want to be remembered for intelligence, not the motion of girls hips. It’s things like this that make older generations portray us as, like you said ‘Yobs’ with the dialect of idiots.

Being around slang constantly, where it gets used every few word,  I have seen terms evaporate from our generations speech. I personally don’t remember the last time I heard someone being called ”Butters.”  Twerking and selfie came from America and transferred to the UK, they are not even widely used here, so why have they been put in to the Oxford English Dictionary?

 

One point that i also want to raise is, why haven’t swear words been a new addition to the Dictionary? Not only are the more widely used across the world,but they have stayed in trends, at least for as long as i can remember.

 I’d Like to thank you again for raising the awareness and stating the issue of this matter.

 

From yours sincerely,

Akira Lasharie Sato

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